Book writing help need

[ddoking007]

ok so I lost a bet I made on youtube last week now I have to write a book about something.... (you will know more about the book when you get a link from me. via PM or skype.)

This is a X rated book not meant for *****. Mature adults are wanted to help edit, and even add sections to help better describe a scene or even a area.

The book is not a human based book, it features anthropod characters, mixed raced characters, gods and goddesses, and mythical creatures engaging is intimate acts.

if you think you can help please send me a PM or reply to the thread and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

thanks for the help,
Self proclaimed Lord of the VOID
DDOKing007

P.S- If you would like to see the book after it is done I will update this thread OP with a Direct link to the page where you can download the Book.
P.S.S- you will be mentioned in the book aswell

[RobertX]

Help wanted, eh?

Tell us what skills are required for our assistance.

[ddoking007]

Help wanted, eh?

Tell us what skills are required for our assistance.

wrong:
the light was blue

Right:
The light shined with a blueish hue almost as if it was trying to find a way to fill the room with this beautiful sapphire hue.

something like that is what i'm looking for. I can get most of it but every now and again I get stuck trying to describe something to add a whole image in the readers mind.

normally I just use game short hand when i type and that won't cut it for a book i'm currently in chapter 3 of this book and as i type this there is over 4k words in.

I also need someone that can help smooth out the pace-ing my prologue can show how bad I am at pacing.

But I'm tend to Type in sections were i will have a paragraph focus on one thing then as we switch from one focus....
To another I'll start another paragraph like so.

you know what ***** it i'm linking the prologue .....

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Sekv...sp=sharing

there the link that's all you getting until I Finish this book

be forewarned the pacing is uneven and also it give a lot sad emotions that may not continue throughout the rest of the book

Update: been stuck trying to describe something in chapter 3 of this book for 2 days now so i'm a bit grumpy not to mention i've been up 24 hours trying to figure out how to describe it.
I seriously need people that know how to describe a scene that has a pattern or other complex object in it that can edit and add to the document as I write the doc updated almost instantly...
going to go crash need some sleep hope this writers block passes soon I can get a lot of sections typed without having to describe what something looks like that isn't a inanimate object.... HELP